LO 4: Games Corner Script Feedback

Client Feedback

Today, we will be meeting with SLTV! Presenter for The Games Corner, Vicky Kilby to gain feedback on our draft scripts.

Aside from a couple of grammatical errors, the first draft was generally well received. 

We asked the following 5 probing questions in order gain exact and concise feedback on what we can do to improve it.

​1. Was the script suited towards the correct target audience?

2. Was the script weighed evenly between both presenters?

3. Were the topics/subjects mentioned in the script suitable for The Games Corner?

4. Was there enough variety in topics, (did they cover enough aspects of the gaming scene?

5. What improvements could be made on the script?

We are going to have a Team Meeting regarding the feedback and what to do next to improve our script.

Here is the recording from the feedback meeting.